Slow morning
Strong coffee
Banana oatmeal
Open notebook
Snuggly dog
Blog post
Home school
Animal fight
Dirty dishes
Pesto pasta
Basketball once
Country roads
Soaring hawk
Galloping mustangs
History lesson
Stone carvings
Sundance site
Nuzzling mustangs
Dust storm
Country roads
Ice cream
Swirling cat
Windy walk
Clean dishes
Folded laundry
Blog post
Hot shower
Leftover soup
Fading light
Bed time?
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Thanks to Ruth Ayres for the inspiration from her slice poem, Full Day.
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Great post. Amazing the minimalist approach remains so telling.
This is fantastic – I love that so much can be said two words at a time! My favorites are “banana oatmeal, leftover soup, and fading light”. Great slice! I’m inspired to try it.
Would love to see nuzzling mustangs. A busy day succinctly summarized.
I feel like you laid out a collection and I can pick up the pieces that intrigue me for further imagining – soaring hawk, dust storm, windy walk, fading light . . .
This is great! I want to try this now!!
This is so fun! I may steal this format for a slice and pass it on to my students as well, if you don’t mind! You day sounded full, but wonderful!
It’s always amazing how much you can say with so little words, but boy your day was full! After ‘basketball once’ I thought there would be another ‘basketball twice’ moment … and then I wondered about that question mark at the end — Bedtime? Hope so!
awesome post! and you definitely had a FULL day! I love the format you chose–maybe you’ll see it on my blog one day this week, too!
That is a busy and well lived day!
A day full of blessings! I love the rhythm of this!
Lovely to read, tap tap, tap tap. Busy but not frantic. I like that you included the “views” too.
This is a form I could steal. I love the strong images that help me see clearly into your day. You are noticing and noting. Thanks.
What an interesting way of looking at your day! I love this format.
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