Ekphrasis 7/30 #npm23

Today I’m playing along with Laura Purdie Salas’s National Poetry Month Project. Each day, she picks a different card from a board game to guide her topic and writes a poem from an array of magnetic poetry words. Visit Laura’s blog to see the topic and words I worked from.

I’m a collector of quirky deer art, especially the kind you find at the thrift store for ten bucks. Literally, in this case. My family thought I was joking when I rushed to grab this fabric print that was leaning, overlooked, against a back wall at Good Will. Is it art? That’s one of our longstanding family debates. But now that it’s the subject of an ekphrastic poem, I think its artistic status is finally secure.

Deer

fear is her treasure
electric alarm &
she is up, around, across
she surges, dances, soars
her fear the music she lives by

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For my National Poetry Project, I’m playing along with the poetry calendar created by Margaret and Molly.


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6 responses to “Ekphrasis 7/30 #npm23”

  1. Irene Latham (@Irene_Latham) Avatar

    A collector of quirky deer art! I love that. And to think of fear as deer’s treasure…I love that, too! Thank you.

  2. Trish Avatar
    Trish

    How do I love this? Let me say the ways: “Deer/fear” approximate rhyme, “alarm (Laura’s word but used here beautifully)/around” something about that sound—maybe the “rrr”?; and the juxtaposition of “music” with “fear” (the word seems brand new in the last line even though it came in with the first). Also, the photo above, what a beauty. This makes my Friday morning happy!

  3. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    I am thinking about the sermon I heard today, Good Friday, and here you write “fear is her treasure,” which connects a few dots for me. Faith does not take away fear; it makes it a treasure we can protect.

  4. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    Interesting to think about — the necessity of fear for survival. Surely for the deer, but also for humans? Are we getting fearful enough to save our planet?

  5. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    I haven’t lately but do look at the art when I’m at Goodwill. One never know what would be found, like your lovely picture! I love that first line, nature’s need, “fear is her treasure”.

  6. Patricia J. Franz: Choose JOY 💕 (@patriciajfranz1) Avatar

    Deer faces are so full of possibility! You could write poems for every piece of deer art and probably never say/see the same thing! I especially love that first image.

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