Ode 15/30 #npm23

Rereading a few of Pablo Neruda’s odes for yesterday’s poem put the form in my mind today. I tried to play along with a different poetry project today but ended up drafting several extremely bad poems that needed to be abandoned forever in the notebook. So I wrote a kind of not-ode.

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Ode to Bad Poems

there
you sit
in my
notebook
with your
false start
dead end
forced rhyme
mixed metaphor

bad poem,
you are
underbaked
overblown
sentimental
nonsensical

you
make me
wonder
why
i even
bother
keeping
a notebook

i am
not
falsely
humble or
overly
critical,
but i
cannot
forgive
you,
bad poem,
for being
so
unpoetical
so
embarrassing

there
you sit
in my
notebook
and
there
you should
stay

**************


For my National Poetry Project, I’m playing along with the poetry calendar created by Margaret and Molly.


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8 responses to “Ode 15/30 #npm23”

  1. Trish Avatar
    Trish

    Between those covers—hidden—might just be a seed for a future blossom…you never know! I really love this ode to those “failed” attempts at poetry. Unforgiving you took your “bad poem” and made it shine!

    1. Elisabeth Ellington Avatar

      It’s true! You never know… I found myself toying with one of the very bad poems I was writing yesterday again today to see if I could make it… less bad? It’s good to have a notebook to keep track of thoughts, even the ones that should never escape the confines of the notebook!

  2. Susan Kennedy Avatar

    Just amazing. Thank you for being such an inspiration.

    1. Elisabeth Ellington Avatar

      I very nearly didn’t write a poem yesterday because I was so stuck, but “ode to bad poems” seemed like good inspiration!

  3. Juliana Ellington Avatar
    Juliana Ellington

    I love the humor of this! False start, dead end, underbaked…

    1. Elisabeth Ellington Avatar

      So many underbaked poems!!

  4. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    There are lots of bad poems in my notebooks. Did we put ode on our calendar chart? I’ve been remiss in actually using it any more. But I love the skinny ode form. Neruda is a good teacher.

    1. Elisabeth Ellington Avatar

      I love the skinny ode too, and I’d forgotten what a wonderful teacher Neruda is. There is something very accessible and inspiring about this form even on a day when I am struggling to write.

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